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Post by woebetide mourn on Jul 13, 2006 23:53:14 GMT -5
Okay this is the first time i've ever attempted a comic or the characters for one, so it isn't the best. So far i only have two characters, myself and my best friend Mickey. {I hate that name... her real name i Maranatha which i think is awesome but she wont let me call her it.. :(.. } Its just kind of about conversations we have in real life usually. And i may add more characters later.  I know this first plot is kind of stupid, and not to mention probably used alot before, but it is something that i thought was funny.. :p Please tell me what you think of it, and what i can improve, because i really dont know that much about making comics. -woe |
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Post by Jest on Jul 14, 2006 1:32:17 GMT -5
Your speach bubbles shouldn't be right to left. cause even though it's higher than the other instinct makes us read left to right. which is confusing.
It's kinda funny, not bad at all really. I wouldn't register a domain name yet though. =P
PS: Maranatah is a wicked name compared to Mickey.
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Post by woebetide mourn on Jul 14, 2006 4:50:56 GMT -5
Yes, even i was having trouble with that.. I've just seen the newspaper pull it off so... :p I changed it, is that better? And what do you mean by a domain name..?
Thank you for the help. :)
-woe
btw: i know. :)
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Post by Jest on Jul 14, 2006 5:01:05 GMT -5
Well webcomics when they are great enough get websites for themselves outside of like Keenspace or something. =P
Easier to read now I think. By the way.
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Post by woebetide mourn on Jul 14, 2006 5:04:46 GMT -5
Oh i see. Thanks for the help. Can you guess which one is me? :D -woeedit: Lollipops and Green day Comic #2  I got sick of the bubbles.. -woe |
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Post by woebetide mourn on Jul 14, 2006 23:18:14 GMT -5
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Post by Zeke on Jul 18, 2006 1:43:31 GMT -5
I liked the second one best. Madfe me laugh =D
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Post by woebetide mourn on Aug 2, 2006 15:14:38 GMT -5
Thanks. (: I should post more soon.
-woe
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Post by Eskimo on Jan 25, 2007 20:15:25 GMT -5
Heh, these are great especially liked the first one. Can't say I knew what was going on in the last though. What's that on her back?
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